Wednesday, June 14, 2006

You Know This One's For You


I've been doing a lot of thinking,
So much that my mind's given up,
Now it's just pure heart, nothing else....

So hear me out....

I've said all I had to say,
Tried to get you to see things my way,
But still, like always, you'll just say,
"Maybe it will work someday."

Now I know that i can't rhyme for nuts,
At this point, this poem's just going bust,
But I really, really don't care,
These words are going nowhere

It's just from me to you
"I'm falling in love with you."

I know I've said this time and time again,
But these thoughts keep clogging up my brain,
I'm honest here, please don't mock me
My brain and my heart just won't let me be

So I guess I'll just start of anew,
It's just between me and you,
"I'm falling in love with you."

I really don't have anything to say
Just thinking of you used to make my day
But now I know that's just wrong,
That's why I tried to write a song,
But I know this just wont make sense to you,
But it's true, yo..
"I'm falling in love with you."

I hate that I feel like this,
like a huge pile of shit,
But I want you to know this is not your fault
Just my senses leaving me deserted
In a dark and lonely vault

Well. this time I know what I want,
Happiness for you is all that I want,
And I hope you'll never ever know,
How my feelings for you continue to grow..

But this one's between me and you...
"I've fallen in love with you."

-This can either be a poem or a really bad song, assuming I decide to put a tune to it. Either way, it's my feelings..and I don't know why, but this sure as hell seemed the best way to express them-

Cheers and good notions

V

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

finally, a new post!

Inspired, Obviously by Fort minor - Where'd you go, innit?

one question.... why?

why the untimely love song?

Anonymous said...

Rao!! Dunno wat to say man! Ur gonna tell me right???

Anonymous said...

Heyy, I wish I knew who she is, she's lucky to have somebody who cares about her that much. Very heartfelt, I must say. Well, as for the writing style itself, you're right, unedited, I don't think it would make a good song since it's maybe too long and lacking structure to be a song...but as a poem, u allowed that liscence, so it's good. Hope u good again soon, V.
Lots of love

Anonymous said...

hey..dat was neat..m sure d gurl is floored readin dis..vishnu rao..dint knw u cud be such a hopeless romantic too!!!nuthing bad..its quite adorable actually..

Anonymous said...

too many faceless replies, huh?

Anonymous said...

AAH V ..the eternal casanova and he has some fans..but who is the one he pines for????

Anonymous said...

V wonders who the third anonymous comment was posted by..rewards and exaltations shall be yours if only you do reveal yourself...gives me an idea for a new post

Anonymous said...

I THINK I KNOW WHO THE FIRST ANON IS,,THE SECOND I CAN GUESS.THE THIRD MUST BE SOMEONE WHO IS ROMANTICALLY INCLINED TO U..MY GUESS ISS..LEAVE IT I LL TELL U IN BANGALORE